Tuesday, August 7, 2012

The Spaces Between -- Revised

As we are nearing the final edits of Dead Spaces, I've trimmed some fat from The Spaces Between. There was some bad dialogue, needless descriptions, and a scene or two that were unnecessary. These changes do not take away from the plot and help to keep the story moving--the low reviews I have received for this were spot-on in their assessments.


  1. Fantastic cover! I love that you used the feedback that you received to make improvements to your book. I know it is hard to chop things out of the story- but usually I feel better afterwards. It sounds like the changes you made have improved the story. Sounds like an interesting story. :)

  2. Thank you, yes it is sometimes good to clean house and just focus on moving everything forward. It's funny when you look back on your first major work and cringe a little... but, if we didn't keep improving, then what is the point of writing?